To describe that feeling beyond the realm of love
Of which forever in your soul remains
Is not one single word I can think that does
That only one's heart can purely contain
Every minute of every day be consumed the thought
To ly in bed at night and feel the pulse race
Memories are stored and never forgot
Awake with that smile upon ones face
Reminders that bear the power thereof
A song, a word, or photograph
Constant, never depleted from thought
Someone's gesture, action, smile, or laugh
Peace is something beyond love one might say
I believe it more defined, perhaps more complex
A feeling so intense it will keep your heart at bay
Near lifeless or barren until that moment of next
Beyond the realm of love
Is every thought, emotion, breath
The tingling sensation that it's made of
So enduring that it could accompany in death.
Nevertooold
8 comments:
Wow amazing my friend.. You know this is true.. when you think about it.. Just look at an old photo or something and look at the smiles we get from them.. thanks again for making me remember all those smiles I get when i look at my great grandma and my oldest daughter when she was 11 months old..
Hi Tweety, Thanks so much for visit and kind comments. I'd hoped was not over the top, but wanted to present as I feel it. I'd been working on this poem for quite some time and revised, revised, revised as was not exactly what I was trying to express. Yes, it applies to so many loved ones and others. Thank you again and hope you've a wonderful day!!
Kindest Regards,
Dave
Hi Dave!!! Was just browsing around, and checking blogs out to see what I have been missing. :O) Wonderful poem, and right to the heart. Hope all is well your way, and have a wonderful day!!!!
Hi Ticc, Nice hearing from ya and thanks for your nice comments. I'm well and hoping you and yours are too. Have a super day and ttys.
Hi, Dave ! It's me, Kate, from Big Sky Artworks. I just thought I'd let you know that I (well, my kitten) has a new blog: http://bigskykabuki.blogspot.com
Join us for silly fun and cuteness!
Kate
hi kate!
so nice to hear from ya! i been down n out for a bit but will bb soon and will check out the blog via phone as puter went south on me a couple weeks ago. lookin forward to readin ur blog and hope kitty's doin well! ttys n take care!
all the best,
dave
really lovely...congrats... it touched my soul...
Hi Aly,
Thanks soo much and very glad you enjoyed.
All My Best,
Dave
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